Progress Report!
Not off to a bad start... but watch Tail's speech box. The arrow points to sonic.
And make them a bit bigger, so the text isn't so cramped.
And... is that giant sprite yours? Or custom? If so, good job. I'm not to knowledgeable in Sonic sprites, so I wouldn't know. It just seems custom.
Don't resize manually like you did in comic 2. Use Paint's (if you're using paint) stretch/skew option (under tools, when you have your sprite selected), and set the numbers to any multiple of 100. This keeps it in balance.
However, if you choose an odd-numbered multiple of 100, you will not be able to reverse the resize evenly.
Don't resize more than once, and reverse a resize more than once.
Thse are the golden rules of resizing. Learn them well.
I'm faving this, to see where it goes. Update frequently, and bring the craziness!!!